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Tsitshoh
10-01-2003, 10:19 AM
She:kon!

A conspiracy of poetry...

Mouse in the Factory

by Tsitshoh

Daylight ends when
the many suns in the sky
are suddenly extinguished
by the hands of the god-beings
that scurried under them.

Daylight ends, with the closing of the box
a big iron box,
that locks away the food.
Some crumbs fall on the floor;
It may be enough today.

On comes the night
cool and dark,
humming from far away,
but quiet.

She sells her art
by a hole in the wall
a marginal living,
but a dead give-away
for pest control.

Skennen

...Tsitshoh...

Blackbear
10-01-2003, 01:49 PM
would you be so kind as to tell me what was the inspiration for this poem ?

Tsitshoh
10-01-2003, 03:25 PM
She:kon!

would you be so kind as to tell me what was the inspiration for this poem ?

A starving artist friend of mine too timid to break out of the hole she is in...

Skennen

...Tsitshoh...

Sekon
10-01-2003, 11:01 PM
She:kon!



A starving artist friend of mine too timid to break out of the hole she is in...

Skennen

...Tsitshoh...

What Bear?? You think it was about you??? Lol

~Sekon~

Blackbear
10-02-2003, 03:41 PM
No I just wanted to know...cause it did'nt sound like a personal experience that he would have... very good though , I likes it